days that race
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days that rattle
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days that crash
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days that plod
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days that wrinkle
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days that jump
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days that stumble
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days that skip
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days that end.
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days that rattle
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days that crash
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days that plod
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days that wrinkle
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days that jump
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days that stumble
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days that skip
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days that end.
sometimes days that don't seem to end. Very nice imagery. and Bob is always appreciated.
ReplyDeletetag-i had you in mind when i picked the bob.
ReplyDeleteYou are getting so good at this. You have your own style. I'm liking it a lot.
ReplyDeletekass-i'm glad you like it. i know my style is not for everyone. i seem to be on a poetry roll of late-right brain run amuck.
ReplyDeleteThe lily gives me vertigo!
ReplyDeleteokatb-when i took this, i named it "too much caffeine"!
ReplyDeleteAaahhh! Caffeine! Can there be too much?
ReplyDeletestanding, this post is perfect for what I'm going through right now. (conversation over at Tag's other blog: www.tag-mike.blogspot.com)
ReplyDelete- having a hard time getting to sleep......
okatb-yes-when i can't hold the camera steady, it's too much!
ReplyDeletegj-saw the other post, be there soon. i didn't sleep last night either. maybe a little TOO much synchronicity?